Stars look down

[Mello]

The white furred wolf walking onto beach quietly before blinking and exclaimed, "Oh my! Sand." She blinked and suddenly broke out in a grin. "SAND!" She burst out in loud laughter and started to cackle inbetween gasps as it was hard for her to breath.

She suddenly stopped and started to walk again muttering to herself about 'fishies, sand, and a bright bubble'. She easily walked straight ahead without sinking into the sand at all. She blinked and sighed down at the swimming fish.

"I want to eat fishie but I'm not that hungry. I wonder if I can find someone to eat it with?" Her green eyes sparkled as she found the challenge to find someone to eat with very entertaining. Her tail wagged slightly as she yipped in joy.

"Okay fishies! I'll be right back." She stopped suddenly. "You won't leave right?" She stared at the fish worriedly. She suddenly growled. "FINE! I don't need you!" She cried.

"Leave me alone!" She screamed.

[Soul]

Aurelio padded onto the beach. He could scent anohter wolf nearby. Fae," he scented. He followed it over to a white she-wolf with green eyes. "Hello. What's your name," he asked, silently ready to attack if necessary. "I am called Aurelio," he continued, not caring whether or not she answered. The black wolf's eyes glowed with pride.

He recognized teh she-wolf as Hoshi, his oldest friend from the time when he had been shunned from his pack. The wolf gasped. "Hoshi? Is that you," he asked, reveling in her.

[Mello]

Hoshi whined at the fish before suddenly turning alert and her white ears flexed around. She sniffed. "Brute." She growled as her snout wrinkled in a snarl and her eyes narrowed dangerously.

She heard him behind her in less than two minutes. "Hello. What is your name?" He asked kindly. You could hear him tense slightly. "My name is Aurielo."

She turned around and he gasped. "Hoshi? Is that you." It took her a minute and she pouted. "AURI!" She screamed. "THE FISHIES TOOK MY LIVER!" She whined as she ran around in a circle and hopped around like her tail was on fire.

"Auri-Auri?" She asked. "...Did you have sex yet?"

It seemed she had a knack of asking rude and innapropriate random questions somewhat seriously.

"Jingle." She said something before jumping in the water and screaming. "IT'S COLD!"

[Soul]

Aurelio laughed and shook his head slowly in embarrassment. She always had a a knack for using the most embarrassing nicknames. "What do ya mena did i have sex yet," he asked, whining a little. "You know I don't think I should tell you that," the wolf said smiling. He knew that his old friend was as fierce as they came. The brute looked at the fish in the water. They were lucky. They could escape her happiness.

[Mello]

Hoshi suddenly stopped prancing around in the clear water and looked to Aurielo sadly. "I'm not young anymore...I don't have to deal with those dribbling fools!" Her calm happy expression suddenly turned to evil and manic expression. "Are you calling me weak Aurielo?" She snarled dangerously.

"Those idiots are dead!" She snarled. A fish touched her hind leg suddenly and she squealed in surprise.

"FISHIE!" She screamed as she dove into the water. "You evil fishes." She growled as she pranced through the water. She skidded a few times before balancing herself and snapping.

[Soul]

Aurelio smiled as his friend yowled at the fishes. "Well...I think I'm gonna go crawl in that hole. It seems much safer than staying over here...." he barked, grinning. The fish that Hoshi found WERE staring at us. "How bizzare," he saisd staring at them. I wonder....

[Mello]

Hoshi suddenly stopped and turned her head away snootily. "Fine. Be a coward. You always run away when I talk. I'm eating." She growled.

Instead of the perky insane young wolf was a evil and conniving wolf that could probably match on par with some of the most devious minds. Her eyes were narrowed and her green eyes that sparkled were dead and ice cold. She hated when people dismissed her...they did just what daddy did. 'Great job, Roku!' The celebrated her brother but never her. While thinking about it her tail swished angrily and her teeth were bared in a snarl.

She attacked one of the fish wish a swift bite and glared at Aurielo before ignoring him to sit on a rock and devour the salt water swimming animal. Her eyes were still narrowed as she chomped on the fish murderously.

"Idiot." She snorted. "The sand is smarter than you, mousebrain." She muttered.

[Soul]

Aurelio grinned at his friend as he returned."Well maybe if you weren't so insane...." The black brute poked at her with his snout. The wolf was almost jumping with excitement. He had to get something to eat. Aurelio padded over to the water and took a few drinks of it. The brute had alot to do.

[Mello]

Hoshi growled dangerously at the brute. She was still pissed off. She hated when people dismissed her. Her eyes still glittered with anger.

"Aurielo get your own food. If you're so smart it should be easy for a big brute like you." She spat.

She snapped at him and snarled when he poked her but that was a normal reaction. When she was done she walked up to him while he was drinking the crystal water and pushed him into it.

"Stupid brutes." She muttered as she walked away.

"I wonder if there is a pack near here. I scented wolves a while ago but it was fresh." She whispered to herself. "I want to join their pack. If they don't let me I probably be VERY pissed."

I snarled deeply.

"Aurielo I'm pissed leave me alone." She snarled once more as she laid down on the rocks.

[Soul]

Aurelio stared after his friend. "But..Hoshi...Wait come back. I'm coming with you," he barked. The black brute grinned at her, nuzzling her side. "I'm sorry if i hurt your feelings, or pissed you off. Will you please forgive me," he asked, turning around.

[jack]

(( Hiya huys if you want to join the the skyla pack can you please post around 90+ words please and describe in as much detail as you can please such as the things your wolf sees, feels and smells as we cannot see into your minds so describe as much as you can please I am not a mod or admin but I think it would help us reply to your posts =] try making your writing small and put bold on speech and talic thoughs that would help a bunch too ))

[Mello]

OOC- Thank you Kovu.

Hoshi said nothing at the apologetic black wolf. She forgave him in a heartbeat beacuse she knew he meant it. "Auri-Auri, I do forgive you but please remember that it won't keep happening."She growled. Her green eyes glittered to it's wide spaced-out form as she grinned. Her thoughts were mostly voiced loudly so her brain always sounded like crickets when she wasn't full of negative emotions.

Her mouth was wide in a white-fanged grin. "There is a pack. I want to join it. We need to find the Alphas and make them let us in their pack. We're fast and strong if there isn't a place with the Alphas then we'll be hunters. You're an idiot when it comes to medicine. I know very little." She said quietly. "Let's go into the forest." Her paws ghosted over the rough sand as she stared up at the blue sky. Green buds were spaced all over the ground and grass was finally the soft green. It smelled fresh and she smelled the beautiful awakening forest.

[jack]

Try using less talkings and more descripion and thoughts for example for example you said "There is a pack. I want to join it. We need to find the Alphas and make them let us in their pack. We're fast and strong if there isn't a place with the Alphas then we'll be hunters. You're an idiot when it comes to medicine. I know very little." Hoshi walked towards the other wolf and suddenly came across a strong scent ' it must be alphas' she thought she wanted to join a pack and knew if she found the alphas she could ask for exceptance at the moment they were both tresspassing if another wolf came across them they would be killed. Hoshi looked at the other wolf and moved her head as if to say come-on-lets-go. Hoshi knew she was powerful and strong but an adverage for a fae but a brute could easily kill her if she wasn't careful 'I would like a high ranking status' she thought to herself. The fae walked feeling the soft sand beneath her pads her paws slowly began to sink into the sand when she stopped .... See out of that speech look what I changed it into I can help if you PM me I would be happy to help or post on the forum we will all help I know how hard it is to write a large post but the more descriptive the easier for people to reply and they reply will be longer then ect ect

I hopes this helps to improve your role playing even more also for your speech change the colour if you want and bold it or leave out the bold if you put colour your choice but the more you post each time and the better description you use the more people who will want to role play with you =] I am not being nasty I am trying to help you.

Blue = your post

Brown = My post from yours

Italic = Thoughts
Bold = Speech
Normal = decripton

[Soul]

(( i do know how to post ay know..im on other sites where you must post 2 paragraps at least each with at least 6 sentences...sometimes its not possible to post all that much without going into random annoying stuff.....ill post later..maybe...and maybe ill call mellow and ask her to as well..maybe))

[Mello]

((*sighs* Soul, we could always get better at posting. I'm just not too sure how I'm supposed to decribe thoughts that don't exist. I mean she isn't thinking of these things. All you hear in her mind are crickets. ))